I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I think you have not given the right score because you have only shared one part of the sheet. Next time you need to sit with me so I can show you what I mean.
Hi Shikarn Hi Shikarn I really like that blog post that you did. I like how you said that you are going to try and do more next time you do maths. I also like how you wrote down your score you got this time. Maybe next time you should try get more right and then do a blog post about how much you improved!!! Keep up the AWESOME work Shikarn
Hi this is bailey from gilberthorpe school this story is very cool i like the river it looks cool to play in but i bet you had fun there i hope you had a good time there i liked the green trees to i hope you had fun on the playground.
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I think you have not given the right score because you have only shared one part of the sheet. Next time you need to sit with me so I can show you what I mean.
ReplyDeleteNi hao Shikarn
ReplyDeleteGood try ro get five out of ten so that half and thats good biut maby next time put a bit more infomation about what you did.
But bye.
Hi Shikarn
ReplyDeleteHi Shikarn I really like that blog post that you did.
I like how you said that you are going to try and do more next time you do maths.
I also like how you wrote down your score you got this time.
Maybe next time you should try get more right and then do a blog post about how much you improved!!!
Keep up the AWESOME work Shikarn
Hi shikarn your blog post looks like you did
ReplyDeletewell.
Hi shikarn your blog post looks like you did
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Hi this is bailey from gilberthorpe school this story is very cool i like the river it looks cool to play in but i bet you had fun there i hope you had a good time there i liked the green trees to i hope you had fun on the playground.
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