I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora it's Zoey from Gilberthorpe School. I like the way that you said he sounds like a bee. Maybe next time you could check your poem before you publish it. I love the fact that you have said that the kids were asleep.
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Kia ora it's Zoey from Gilberthorpe School.
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you said he sounds like a bee.
Maybe next time you could check your poem before you publish it.
I love the fact that you have said that the kids were asleep.
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ReplyDeleteIts Keisha
I love your Smillies!