I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Hi Shikarn,
ReplyDeleteI like the shape monster because it looks cool because it is pacman and it has hair too.
Put the intro at the top
Hi Shikarn its Jesse here I like your shape its like pakman I like the hair too I like you have put three eyes.
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