I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Shikarn, Zoey here. Great job on the blog post starting sentence. Maybe next time you could write a bit more about it and post a picture of it because there isn't that much there and I was hoping that there was going to be more. I know you can do better. Blog U Later!
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HI shirkan it is lacie here good job on this. Maybe enxt time you should add more writing.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Shikarn, Zoey here.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the blog post starting sentence. Maybe next time you could write a bit more about it and post a picture of it because there isn't that much there and I was hoping that there was going to be more. I know you can do better.
Blog U Later!