I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Crazy for kids can reserch and why we donate to theam
Kia ora bloggers today for our work we have to research about Kids can and name reasons why we donate to them. I have made a DLO on my chrome book on a google slide here it enjoy...
Hi Shikarn nice blog it is very interesting and thoughtful for you to write this to persuade people to donate. Maybe you should and a donation link just so people will donate to help kids can. Your writing is good but you have spelled them wrong that's all right. I love the post keep it up bye!!!
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Hi Shikarn i really like the way how you search some facts about the Kids Can and some information about them. Nice work!!
ReplyDeleteDear Liyah Thankyou for you nice and positive comment
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Ka pai Shikarn for making an effort to reply to all your comments! You are showing great blogging etiquette!
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Hi Shikarn nice blog it is very interesting and thoughtful for you to write this to persuade people to donate. Maybe you should and a donation link just so people will donate to help kids can. Your writing is good but you have spelled them wrong that's all right. I love the post keep it up bye!!!
ReplyDeleteDear Dani thankyou for telling me that I had A spelling mistake
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Hi Shikarn good job on the research on kids maybe next time put some colour in the background and maybe make the slides faster.
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