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Monday, March 13, 2017

A grumpy bear

A grumpy bear




Character A grumpy bear.

Setting At a farm

Problem Found an unlucky penny



Character A grumpy bear 1 He is brown. 2 He is grumpy. 3 He is mean. 4 Big 5 He is fat. 6 He has a spikes.

Setting At a farm 1 The farm is big. 2 It’s green. 3 It has sheep on it. 4 It has pigs on it. 5 It fogey. 6 It’s creepy.

Problem Found an unlucky penny 1 it’s unlucky. 2 bad things happen. 3 You will get bad luck. 4 You will get things that you don’t want. 5 You won't live. 6 Your things will get taken.

Once upon a time at a farm, there was a big brown grumpy fat bear that had spikes.  His life was perfect.  He would lie down all day.  But when he went hunting he found a penny.  But this was an unlucky penny so when he wished for things but bad things would happen.  The farm became a big mess and that. He found the penny in the woods.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Shikarn Miss M here, I really enjoy some of the detail you have included in your story. I wonder what the bear was wishing for? It sounds like his life was pretty good already. Did the problem ever get solved?

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